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    Default Anyone give my poem a read?

    I wrote this little thing during a freewriting experiment, it's about having an identity crisis

    A prototype of yourself
    Searching for an identity
    All you can do is question
    Everything you've ever known

    "Is this me?"
    "Is this what i'm destined for?"

    No one to help you
    This must be done alone
    Withdrawal from society
    Apathy towards humanity

    "What is my design?"
    "What is my purpose?"
    Ambivalence towards friends
    Intolerance towards all others
    Secretive towards family
    Yet companionship is what you seek

    Like a snake shedding its skin
    You shed your old life
    In hopes of starting anew
    Leaving the masks behind

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    Poetry thread (had to dig a bit for this) - https://www.bodyjewelleryshop.com/fo...-poetry-thread
    Piercings (some retired) - Septum, nose, double eyebrow, left tragus, left nipple, lip, rook, left lobe and multiple cartalidge.
    - Tattoo of a fantasy style sword on my calf
    - Raven perched on pocket watch tattoo on my right arm
    - Evil skeletal jester on the other calf
    Here's to love, the sickness
    The great martyr of the soul
    Here's to life, the vice
    The great herald of misery

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    thanks

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    Very nice!

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